Clock struck 5PM ... she was fretful.... she couldn't wait to see him.... smiling within herself n beaming with boundless joy..... she went into the dressing room.....
A beautiful angel clad in a simple half white saree with purple floral arrangements ... her gleaming open hair brushin her shoulders....was smiling at her!
She looked once again into the mirror...smiled again...Blush written all over her!
A beautiful angel clad in a simple half white saree with purple floral arrangements ... her gleaming open hair brushin her shoulders....was smiling at her!
She looked once again into the mirror...smiled again...Blush written all over her!
she looked dangerously beautiful!!!
Today was her first b'day after she got locked with her beloved hubby.... 5 months have passed after their wedding and every now n then he used to give her pleasant surprises....
He didn't show a sign of knowing her b'day and didn't even wish her till now.... yet she was glittering with happiness and eagerly awaiting the surprise thatz in store for her....
Phone rang.... it was like a symphony for her.... she swirled around... her hair flyin over her face..rushed towards the cordless phone... "sollu da enge iruka?"
"oyi enne d phone edutha hello nu sollanum ille yaaru pesrathunnu kekanum...ulagathula un aaalu mattum thaan unaku ph pannuvaaana? "
"adi chi...neeya di...sollu ...."
"mmm..4 varusham friend a pazhagitean....sari b'day wish pannalaam na...chi ya...?"
"romba pesatha d....sari sari wish pannu seekram.... en purushan call pannuvaan"
"mmm....happy b'day d... onnu solta.... so glad n happy for u d..itz so good to c u so happy after all the hardships through ur life...God Bless U d"
Phone hooked!
Her thoughts went back 12 months.... she was betrayed, dejected....alone...nothing interesting for her in life... until she met him... Her moments with him seemed to give her some feelin which she never felt before.... she proposed....parent's agreed....she held his hand...firmly....
Phone jarred on her ears.....
"hello"
"Yeh ... figure...enne d panra..?"
her eyes brightened.... her face changed faster than light!
Her thoughts went back 12 months.... she was betrayed, dejected....alone...nothing interesting for her in life... until she met him... Her moments with him seemed to give her some feelin which she never felt before.... she proposed....parent's agreed....she held his hand...firmly....
Phone jarred on her ears.....
"hello"
"Yeh ... figure...enne d panra..?"
her eyes brightened.... her face changed faster than light!
"un call ku thaan waitin..... eppo da varuve"
"sweetie....off la important client meeting da...so inniki 10 mani thaan...neee saptu thoongu...naan saptu thaan varuven"
"poda .... ..."
"plz pls pls...sari taknu oru umma kode..meeting ponom..."
"onnnum kidaiyathu po..."
"okie pondatti madam...naaan apeet.... itz gettin late"
she couldn't control her dissapointment....tears rolled off her tender cheeks...
"did he really forget?" she couldn't believe it....
dejected.... she cuddled into the couch like a child....
her eyelids came down as it couldn't control the heaviness ....
2 minutes passed...
she was jerked by a sudden vibe ..opened her eyes to c the beautiful colors of roses....the bunch of flowers slowly moved to show the face of her beloved.....
"Happy B'day honey"
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She stretched her arms lying on the couch.... smiling........beatifully.....
He reached her and held her tightly.. givin himself as her b'day present!
25 comments:
aaah haa.... same old story but well narrated.. cinema script ezhudhunga pa neenga ellarum..
oo..that was awfully romantic:)...lol...loves it...so neeyum un pondati k ippdi than surprise tara poreengalo..;)...
OH howww nice!..thats very beautigul..very well written
Ennama po dakalti..
Machi i was waiting to c u r fiancee first bday and how u r gonna celebrate it..
All the best machi
Aaaha adult only post'a pochey... :))
Nice post! Ithuku mela onnum solla mudiyathu ;)
Dina, excellent da..Got time to read now only da..
My tribute:
Vaaradha mani Vaaradha
Thaa..Raadha..Mutham..
Thaa..Raadha..
Marandhaara Naalai marandhaara
Adi Podi Paythiyakkaari..
@Vishy
S da simple 1 ...these simple moments speak a lot da...thx machi
@raz
halo madam... apdi ethaachum na na eppovo ipdi la post potrukanum..
adangriya nee!
@mystery
Thx ma.. mmm...neria thoughts iruku...dunno whether they'll wrk out ;))
@Krithks
Thx . glad that u liked it
@logic
ha ha machaan... ithellam kadhaila nadakalaa...aana..reality la ...pakalaaam ;)
@Ponn
enne ma ithuke "A" rating koduthita? ... decent romantic post nu thaan nenachean..
@Deebaaboo
machaan...ur comments r spl da..very glad that u liked it...good lines from u too..
enna nadakuthu deep loves ah...ethu epdiyo wonderful narration...jamaai raja :-)
Good one to give a sudden twist in the end. A romantic one page story.
Well written story.
Thanks for visiting my blog. I read ur 'missin....?'. Was very nice. appadiye en veetla nadakkara madhiri irundhadhu. Ammmaa venum ippo...:(
Kisitta naina....kadhai bada sokka kidu...
Hehehe..Adutha post podunga poonthu viladiduvom'la comment kaalathula ;)
Ithu konjam amaithiya irukka vendiya post :)
@Syam
Thx ya
loves laa ethuvum illiya....chumma ore post...ennatha jamaikrathu ;)
@Balaji
Thx man...
@Priya
Thx ...taknu velaiya vittutu escape aagunga ..vootuku ;)
@Harish
Danks da.. local slang party ya nee?... ithellam sai salpa kalika matter da ;)
@Pon
mm...ponn yekkov..pakalam paklam..;)
Woooooooowwwwww!!! That was one awesome romactic narration!!! Loved it tons!!! Keep writing... u have a super cool and neat blog here... totally fell for ur blog... shall blogrol ya!! :)
And yeah, i hopped into ur foto blog too... superbbbbbbbb fotos!!! I am a foto freak too.. and yeah, picasa rocks!!!
@Prithz
Welcome here and thx for the wonderful comments... nenja nakkita po ;)
foto freak..y dont u share ur clicks..
Next post pls :D
Romba sorry. Unga post la irunda pic-a na sututen. Romba pidichudhu. Used it for my blog. Keep writing more. Waiting for ur next post. Ellam supera iruku :-)
Kalaba kadalan-lerndhu suttu light-a twist panta kandu pidika mattoma?? ;) J/k, good one
nice! well written!
machi,
kalakitta maa. sorry im new to you but came to you through regular blog search. keep the good work.
Me, just started blogging at
kittu-mama-solraan.blogspot.com
shall come back to you in your next post
@HeidiKris
Ozhunga $1000 anupi vainga .. ;)
Thx ..saw ur blog ...liked it ...blog pakkam vanthu romba naal aachu..will try to scribble something..
@usha
usha yekkov... ithu etho padathula varuthu neenga sollithaan theriyuthu.. ;) i dont c movies often.. ..
n e ways nandri...
@deeksh
thx ma..
@kittu
kittu mama time kidaikum pothu unga blog a look vidren... comment ku thx ba..
Hi Dakalitz!
Happy NY!
Very refreshing post!!!
@Kiruks
Thx.
Blessed and a gr88 n happy 2007 for u too... nice to c u here after a long time.
intha post la irukka feelingsa paathuttu i thought it shud b a gal who wrote this...
but surprise surprise...
awww..that was absolutely sweet!
im adamant about this..i WILL learn tamil from your blog, man! keep posting in tamil...*evil laugh*!
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