3 Months Back ....
He held her hand firmly...those hands were shakin... they both exchanged diamond rings for the second time in their life...There was no one in the crowd who didn't envy this wonderful couple.
It was their golden anniversary...
When it was time to retire for the day, they held their hands together, thanked the almighty. He placed his old palms on her wrinkly cheeks... kissed her right on her forehead... gently!
Good night Sweet Heart
25 Years Back....
It was 10 AM , her phone rang... she was shellshocked on hearing the news...He met with an accident...she rushed to the hospital... minutes were moving like leap years...she choked to the core...not a soul on earth could console her...12 hours passed...she was sitting on his side...holding his hand...his whole body not movin an inch.... she felt a sudden vibe...he jerked a bit...his heavy eyelids...not allowing to see her eyes... yet she could read his eyes...she Knew...
she bent and placed her forehead on his lips.... A smile which only she cud see n feel eloped him....that conveyed lotss...his heart echoed...
Good Night Sweet Heart
48 Years Back....
He couldn't see her cry in pain....he felt more pain in his heart.... he couldn't control.....he turned to look through the window..tears rolling down his cheeks.. The moon was shining down gracefully.... He was cursing God.
She gave one long cry...which made an angel cry....she gave birth to a beautiful...baby girl.... He took his little angel...and showed it to her.... she looked, smiled and slept off.. He placed his little angel on the cradle and with tears still rolling down, he kissed her....
Good night Sweet Heart
50 Years back....
It was the first night for them... his angel came in...she looked divine....he gently held her hand ..her beautiful eyes...gleaming ...Together...they took the sarced vows once again... they were one.... he held her tender cheeks on his hands... she closed her eyes as he bent .... He placed a gentle, firm kiss on her forehead,
assuring the love, support, trust - foundation of a life, together n always
She felt it..He whispered
Good Night Sweet Heart
Today ...
She was lying there ... wrinkles on her face didn't deter her beauty...he stood motionless...his eyes were locked on her....her face was shining like never before...
He knelt down... bent...and kissed her on her forehead...
That wasn't the last, It was Eternal!
They nailed the coffin....
Good Night Sweet Heart
He Cried Aloud!
28 comments:
Welcome back sir....after long time...u give us an opportunity to read about ur thoughts...
hmmm...cute post da...dont know what inspired you but it was really sweet...i liked the way you narrated it..hopefully u dont disappear after this post..hehee..cheers..tc
moving post n i loved it :)
gud one dina... really touching...never thot u wud write one though ;-)... jus kidding...keep posting...
Awesome Blog Dina..
Senti eh ezhuthi Kalakkureenga poanga...
Good 2 c a nice post after a long time! And thanku for letting me know abt it..
U have a great writing skill :) keep writing!
@Mystery
Welcome..kavs...nice to c ur comments..inspired nu ille..kind of.. ;)..ya..hope i dont dissapear.;)
@raz
enne ma kanne...good to c u hitiing my blog even though i've been out of it long timeee...thx..
@Poorana..
touching nu Poi solra pathiya... ? ithu copy adichathu ma ;))
@Lakshme.
sari sari ithuellam ipdi feel panna epdi... kanla ore thanni pola ;)...thx laks...nice comment.
@Ponn..
Ya u've been asking me to update this space...athaan sonne..glad u liked it..
Have been reading and liking your relationship posts. This one was totally moving ! Very well crafted !
Hey Dina,
Makes me happy when I dream of this kind of a wonderful relationship..an ideal one...
Make me sad when I understand that reality does nt guarentee you an opportunity to explore such relationships...
May be all relationships can have a good quality??...just that you need to put a little more effort..
Nevertheless thanx for making me emotional !
@Ramya
Welcome here.
Thx for the comment.. glad u liked it...I like reading ur somethings n nothings too... keep coming...
@Deebaaboo
Very true da.. these kind a relationship is a rarity though not impossible...
Welcome back Dina! guess you are back with a bang! Wonderful post! Shows the love the hubby got towards his wife :)
wonderful...i loved it....
wish every love was eternal like this
Lovely story!! First time here..guided thru sophia here!!
Dina this was one of the best of yours..mushy a bit..
the flow was too good and the details perfectly accommodated the time frame you were specifying in each para..
Good one..u are driving me to fill up my page...
Thank you for stopping by my blog.please do stop by again.A very moving post so well written.
U r missing again ;)
@HeidiKris
Thx sri.. keep coming...hopefully will scribble smthg..
@Sophie
thx sophie..glad that u liked it...mmm atleast love should be near eternal if not eternal..
@Shiv
Welcome shiv...thx for dropping by..keep coming..
@Logic
Machaan... As I told u...this one is for u da.. :)
@Starry Nights
Welcome and keep coming lalitha..thx for the comment..
@Ponn
Present maam ;) .. will post smthg soon..
Really amazing.. was expecting the end.. but the last line took emotions to the peak!.first time ive read your blog.. this impression is to last.
@Rithika
Thx rithika for the heartfelt comments...keep coming...will try to post frequently...
Blog updated machi...
Simply Superb Dina!!
- Swarna
too long hibernation period not good for blog's health! Come back soon!!
@Swar..
Glad u liked it :)
@Heidi
Sure will be back soon heidi..thx for hittin the space n reminding me ;)
BTW y u hav disabled commenting on ur page...?
Hi,
Just happened to visit your blog today.. amazing and very touching post... The love and relationship they share make me to feel that i should also have a life like this... The way they love each other and the warmth they shared was excellent... Keep writing more...
Entha oorlanga irukkeenga neenga..
Cheers
Anu
@Anu
Thx for droppin here... ennoda profile paatha naa enge irukenu theriyum....
Yep this kind a relationship is ideal but not impossible i guess...
Want to write but....therile...will post...more...
wow that was awesome dude!
i saw that u had commented on my post.. so blog hopped to yours from there.
really moving.... the concept and way you had gone back in time were really beautiful.
in a few words you have expressed a lifetime of love
Keep up the good work.
@Anu...
Long time i've been off the blog space...nice to c ur comments...thx for droppin by....
@Aveline
Thx...
Very well written!!!! Very expressive in terms of the emotions portrayed.
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