Thursday, February 23, 2006

Outright It is!!!

Hey Folks...Yep Itz another parallel to Logic's Outright Kiss ..I mean Logic's Post
U might need to check these b4 goin further...
Logic's followed by kirukkal'sfollowed by Ramesh's follwed by mine....


2 years back... At Chennai airport

"I couldn't see my dear ..I know I'll break out if I c her ....
How I'm goin to be there without her for 2 years?
I'll miss u every micro second da chels... "

Ramesh controlled himself and let out all his acting skills to make sure he looked happy that he was goin onsite...

Ramesh had no other option..he had to go for his family...he had to stay there for 2 years just for the money...he had to help his sister get through the deadly disease....

Kavya loooked lost..she missed him terribly...She was not able to control her tears...It was a deeep pain.. Everthing around her looked Empty... Ramesh was her everything...
"How am I going to Handle this" she thought....

"Vijay...coffee??" ..Ramesh's nodded his head a bit ...Vijay understood.."Kavy ..u stay here..we'll be back in a minute "

"Tell me da ...enne feelings ah? "

Ramesh Broke out fell on vijay's shoulders..he cudn't handle it any more!!

"Vijay ...You know abt kavya a lot..take care of her da machi...Shez gonna miss me a lot... Keep me posted abt her da....Itz gonna be like hell without her da .."


Tears didn't cease....

"Hey Ramesh come on man ..cheer up...You got to be strong now..da..remember it is important that u r goin onsite now.. "

"Kavya wud understand... I'll take care da...I know how to keep her happy... don't wry..she'll be fine da... "

Present day...
"we'll be landing in another 10 minutes" pilot's voice woke him up...


Ramesh look through the window, saw the beautiful chennai...

It was morning 1 AM...

Ramesh couldn't wait...."What wud I do on cing her? " ...
"How she wud react?? " ...

He wanted to Hug here and drench her with sweet kisses...

Ramesh as he came out ... could only c kavya in front of him and none of the other hundreds standing in the airport ...

Before he could react, Kavya throwed her arms around him..gave a long KISS right on his Lips...

Ramesh's heart stopped for a moment...He hugged her tightly and could c Vijay standin at a distance ................smilin at him..

Ramesh's eyes thanked vijay ...without whom kavya wud have been terribly down these 2 years.. It was Vijay who shared her sadness, joy, who was with her in person to console comfort her...............
Kept her strong!

Vijay smiled & Winked!

19 comments:

kannan said...

First Logic kku oru "Aa ha"
Second Kirukkal's kku oru "Oh ho"
Ramesh kku oru "hay hay"
Dakaltiz kku "Besh besh..."

Its gr8 yaar, excellent narration with different perspectives, innum yethavathu iruntha namalum yethavathu bloggalam nnu yosikkiren!!!

Ayutha Ezhuthu patha mathiri oru feeling :-)

BZ said...

Hm nice.
But so Vijay did not have _any_ feelings for Kavya at all??

neighbour said...

indha blog konjam realitica irukudu..

kuddos... No triangles..

No ego.. No hidden love and best of the best friend..

logic said...
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Kavitha Jay said...

neeyummaaaa...hehe..unga yellarayum parthu..ippa yennukkum idha pathi yezhadanum polla irrukku.....
good one da..
nanum yen lover a vittutu vera yengaya pogum pothu...vijay maari oru friend kadaikamala poiduvan..(wink)..
yen manasakshi-adhukku first nee oruthana love panannum di naye..

kuttichuvaru said...

ella kathaiyume nalla thaan irukku!! kalakkareengale ellarum!!

logic said...

Honestly speaking as an author of "Outright kiss".I can never imagine me in situation of Vijay as portrayed by me or you.

To some extent i can be like Ramesh.But defenetly not like Vijay.I cant withstand these.

Like if Vijay is in luv with someother girl and inturn he takes care of Kavya...this is possible..

But otherwise Vijay's character can never be imitated by oridinary ppl.

If at all any of u exist like Vijay as portrayed by dakalti..then you are much above than man kind.

Kirukal said...

Good to see something from Ramesh's angle! Well portrayed feelings of Ramesh! But I agree with Logic....if a charecter like Vijay does exsist then he is truly great or a terrible loser!!!

KC! said...

Vijay kannadichitte yosichiruppan, ada paavi, 2ndu varushama cover panna try panniyum patchi parandhu poi unnai kiss adikudhe-ntu :)) any takes on Vijay's aftermath?

dakaltiz said...

@ammu
Outright kiss oda baathipaala thaan intha post...logic's post inspired to write this angle...
Sonthama yosichi ezhutharathuku lazy ya irukku...intha maathiri kadhaiya develop pannrathu easy la athaan ;-)

@Kannan:
Comments ku nanri nanba...thanks for visiting and keep coming man..
Neengalum oru angle la post podunga nanba...

@SK,
"But so Vijay did not have _any_ feelings for Kavya at all??"
Feelings na?? ... He had a good friendship with her sk. He shared all her joy n sadness..

@Neigh:
Nandri nanba..Happy that it sounded realisitc...

@mystery:
nee summa try pannu ma...vera angle try pannu...
"yen manasakshi-adhukku first nee oruthana love panannum di naye"
Naan solren athukku munaadi vijay maathiri oru friend ungalukku amaiyanum ..

@Logic
Happy that this one touched u emotionally da...
"But otherwise Vijay's character can never be imitated by oridinary ppl."

Yep it too tough to be like this but Itz not impossible I guess ;).

@Kiruks:
Thanks kiruks..
".if a charecter like Vijay does exsist then he is truly great or a terrible loser"
He is great..but how can he be a Loser? kiruks..

@Usha
Adi paavi...vijay ya evlo soopera potray panniruken... nee enne na..kathaiyaiye maathurye ma...

Neenga vijay pathi konjam adikrathu ...

Thanks all for youur thoughts.

KC! said...

hey hey, chummadhan pa, ramesh-um logic-um avanai pathi oru angle-la soltangala, adhan naan villain madhiri yosichutten he he

shree said...

che... 'roja koottam' padam madhiri ramesh maariduvannu nenachen. thank god, he is also in same josh. congrats to kavya as she has chosen a true love.
But out of experience solren, almost 80% of boys who goes out far away from her girl tend to change as they come across so many other girls who are attractive than his.

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Sriram said...

Dins...
edhu endha Ramesh kadhai?? or can we substitute Dins in place of Ramesh.. machi, kalakara.. Kadhal rasathula ooori eruka pola..
Sriram

dakaltiz said...

You got the point veda..
"his outstanding love and belief in his lover."
Very important right?

thanks..

dakaltiz said...

"edhu endha Ramesh kadhai?? or can we substitute Dins in place of Ramesh.. machi, kalakara.. Kadhal rasathula ooori eruka pola.."

Ha Ha ..sri ..kathal rasam, sambar laam ethuvum ille da...and ithu dins katha ille ba... ;-))

Innum ponnu ethuvum maatala...matna approm Rasathula OOruvom... ;)

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